In an enthusiastic memory,
RInrainbow
In an enthusiastic memory,
The rain pours even when I dance alone,
By the time this mist clears.
I’ll run with my feet wet,
Daddy, please hold my hand ,
Don’t leave me alone again.…
The moon looks so isolated,
Like it’s weepy in the bright night sky.
Even though I always know the morning will come,
I want to stay in your heart like a lil star.
The day, that moment
If I knew this was gonna happen.
If I knew you won’t be with me anymore,
I would have remembered more of them.
When will it be?
If I see you again
I will look into your eyes And say, “I miss you so much, dad
Behind the faint smile that looked at me
I will draw a beautiful purple shade
We may not be on the same page
But I want to walk this path with you
And want to hold your hand .
My feet are scorching in
the roasting rays of my tears,
Demanded to me Daddy, give me your hand
Please give me breath again
Dad, please say something..
Calling out to you…is your adored child,
You have given true meaning to my life.
Daddy, I won’t memorialise you in the stars,
because they fade away.
I won’t memorise you with a rhyme,
for it will be forgotten one day.
I will just keep you protected in
my heart so that you are with me in every way. I miss you.
To my Daddy
By Rinrainbow
The rain pours even when I dance alone,
By the time this mist clears.
I’ll run with my feet wet,
Daddy, please hold my hand ,
Don’t leave me alone again.…
The moon looks so isolated,
Like it’s weepy in the bright night sky.
Even though I always know the morning will come,
I want to stay in your heart like a lil star.
The day, that moment
If I knew this was gonna happen.
If I knew you won’t be with me anymore,
I would have remembered more of them.
When will it be?
If I see you again
I will look into your eyes And say, “I miss you so much, dad
Behind the faint smile that looked at me
I will draw a beautiful purple shade
We may not be on the same page
But I want to walk this path with you
And want to hold your hand .
My feet are scorching in
the roasting rays of my tears,
Demanded to me Daddy, give me your hand
Please give me breath again
Dad, please say something..
Calling out to you…is your adored child,
You have given true meaning to my life.
Daddy, I won’t memorialise you in the stars,
because they fade away.
I won’t memorise you with a rhyme,
for it will be forgotten one day.
I will just keep you protected in
my heart so that you are with me in every way. I miss you.
To my Daddy
By Rinrainbow
This poem is just beautiful. I know you must really miss your father. I love the last part, where you keep him by your heart so that he is with you everyday.
This is a very nice poem and I understand how you feel. I lost my father when I was six years old. My daughter lost her father (and I, my husband) when she was 5 years old.
This is so beautiful!!! I love love love written words, amazing!!!
This poem is so beautiful… you must really miss your father so much.
My dad passed away two months ago. This really moved me. Beautiful poem.
I know how it feels! You have written such a beautiful poem for your father ❤️ Love it!
This is such a lovely poem. My father passed away a few years ago and this really touched my heart.
Awww, I want to hug you. This is a very sedimental and poignant poem about your daddy. It was beautifully written!
This was such a moving poem. Could feel your emotions through the prose. My condolences to you and your family.
Wow. This poem made me so emotional about my own dad.
This is absolutely one of the most beautiful things I’ve ever read. I know that one day, I”ll have to talk with my father from heart to heart rather than in person.
I’m lucky that my dad is still alive, but my mom passed away a few years ago. Your words have great meaning to anyone who has experienced this type of loss.
That was beautiful and heartwarming. Thanks for sharing it.
This is suche a beautiful share. I’ve read it with so interest, your words are so deep. You know how to touch feelings. – Paolo
You really know how to make me emotional. I am so sad by just reading through the passage.
What a lovely poem. Our dads are such a huge part of our life.
The emotions are just so felt. Great job! Not everbody has this. Use it more.
I’m emotional reading this. I have a rocky relationship with my dad growing up but we got closer and closer as the time goes by. I can feel the lines of the poem.
This one is hitting a bit close to home as my father died one year ago this month. The poem is quite lovely. Thank you for sharing with us!
Beautiful poem. Thanks sharing.
This is so precious and those words are just beautiful. Thank you so much for being so open and sharing.
Aaaawwwww….I love this! What a beautiful expression….
Oh, wow. This one really got me. I’ve always been a daddy’s girl, and I really felt this one. Love it.
I can feel your emotions for your father. Beautiful poem to express yourself.
This a beautiful poem. I can feel your emotions. This pulled on my heart stings.
Such an emotional and powerful poem, and such a sweet dedication to your dad.
I love your poem. I was teary eyed reading this. I can feel your pain, your longing for your father. I lost my father to cancer, 29 years ago. I have been living 29 fatherless years and I miss my dad so much.
This poem is such a touching tribute for dads. It’s beautiful and each line is packed with meaning and emotions.
I still feel the emotions each time I read this piece. As a father, I am deeply touched by your words. It’s timely that we will celebrate Father’s Day soon.
Such a heartfelt poem. I’m sure it was hard to share, but I know a lot of people will be touched by it, especially with father’s day right around the corner.
This was such a moving poem and it definitely brought a tear to my eye. Thank you for sharing it…
Oh, man. Talk about a drop kick in the feels. I love my dad. He’s been my best friend since forever. I can’t imagine losing him.
Beautiful poem. Such touching sadness.
What a tender and deep poem – you sure have lots of talent…and a kind heart 🙂
What a moving poem – it makes me think of my own dad who passed away at the age of 47
OMG! This is a beautiful poem! I miss my dad too. =(
I really love the way you express your love for your dad in this poem. I can tell you guys had a great bond.
Such a lovely poem! Thanks for sharing!
What a beautifully written poem and quite heartbreaking as well. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Indeed a poem full of love. I could only wish, every father in the world could read such beautiful poem.
Heartfelt and definitely impacting those who are in the same situation.
This is beautiful and sad. Love you how expressed your love for your dad. Thank you for sharing this heartwarming poetry.
This is absolutely beautiful. Thinking of you.
I welled up reading this poem. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem truly love the rawness and sincerity of your words.
Even the look of beautiful things, like the moon, can turn when you are sad. This poem evokes very poignant feelings.
This hits home deeply. Thank you for sharing with us.