My heart is so mechanical, the impatient soul is an idiot, how much it loves you, it didn't understand itself. Now someone makes an illustration for this throbbing of the heart. so that it gets that rain of love that drenches it completely. My heart is so mechanical insane what such consequence was there of being with you, I don't know, that there was no sense left in me. my words mystified on my tongue, but couldn't get spoken. In my heartbeat, there is your name alone, and the eyes give this message too. It's all the effect of your eyesight that is there on me. If I bounce my heartbeat, I would end up dead You're the one heartbeat and never wanna skip. Magazineup
Very nice poem. You have a way with words to express your feelings.
Nice poem! I don’t remember when was the last time I wrote a poem.
I love the visualization of rain of love. Absolutely beautiful.
Awesome poem. I like how catchy the words are and describe real life moments as well.
Beautifully written!
Love this. Poetry is such a beautiful way to express what the heart feels.
Wow.. So raw and passionate. Thank you for sharing. I do poetry also. Started dabbling last year.
I love a good poem to orchestrate how I am feeling. I like this one!
I always enjoy reading poems and I haven’t done so for a while. I love this one.
This is a beautiful poem! So beautifully written I really enjoyed it!
Beautiful poem. I am so happy I landed on this website. Thanks for sharing!